After listening to my pitch and watching my video, the rest of the A2 class came up with the strong and weak points of my video, and some suggestions on what could be improved. I will take all of these into consideration when going back to my video.
WWW:
- Good body language
- Good lip syncing
- Good contrast between dreams and reality and portrayal of depression
- Good lighting in some shots (starting+when he was sat alone)
EBI:
- Field location needs to be in a different location or shot in better light
- Make the darker shot lighter on his head
- Add more of a shot variety
- Develop more narrative
- Wasn't so grainy (lighting)
Suggestions:
- Shoot the dark shot in the studio for better lighting
- Use longer shots to show he is isolated/alone
- Experiment with opacity with shots of lights
- Use camera movement
- Blend in lights over the dark footage
- Try to portray fireflies and the impact that they have on him
- Use a different background rather than a field - indoors or maybe a bedroom like it was originally suggested
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